Lullaby - First attempt at film opening

Lullaby - 

First attempt

With this film opening, after putting everything together and seeing what we'd done so far we realised how much it didn't work. The fact that two teenagers are playing the role of what should be two children in the park with a doll does not quite make sense. We like some of the shots we've used and the storyline, however, this would have worked a lot better if we knew children that could play these roles instead of two teenagers. We also like the fact that the doll is being shown repetitively in order to give the audience the message that something isn't quite right.